Sunday 13 April 2014

Spirit Animals

One cold afternoon I woke up and went outside to see my dad. Then my dad give me a medicine drink. It tasted like sweet syrup and when I tasted it my skin was tingling. Suddenly my spirit animal appeared and the colour was black and yellow with a red mark. It was a great lion.



5 comments:

  1. I love the way you described your skin as 'tingling' when you tasted the syrup.

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  2. Jane Va'afusuaga16 April 2014 at 18:02

    Great descriptive writing Mathew!

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  3. Hi Mathew I like your story have you seen the movie Bolt he had a black lighting mark, did the lion have a red shaped mark?

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    1. I said that too Noelani !!!!!

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  4. cool and also I can't believe that it looks scary to me
    and I think that maybe you should watch the movie that Noelani just ok!!!!

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