Sunday 13 April 2014
Nectar ceremony
Once upon a time there was a little boy named Aloysius. He was 11years old and he was tall. One day he was walking along this path and while he was walking he saw a lion. When he saw it he stopped and stared. When he was staring he was scared. After that the lion followed him to the Nectar ceremony and when they got there everyone stopped and said "Is that the lion on our flag?" and he said "Yes his name is Lewis, the lion king of our world". After that we heard a sound like an earthquake and we heard a boom and a bang. When it was finished everyone opened the doors and looked outside and all they saw was nothing. All of it was dark - the whole world was dark.
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You've used a lot of detail in your story Aloysius. It helps me to picture what's going on.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used conversation and words like boom and bang in your writing Aloysius. That made this a very interesting story.
ReplyDeleteNice lion Aloysius it is so dark.
ReplyDeleteLOVE LION
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